You get mini-thoughts, since I’m running around like mad and have limited internets. 
Let’s see…
Query writing is so much easier after this massive edit. I have a much better idea of what I’m doing; the plot IS compressible into one paragraph. It’s mostly tweaking with the query that needs to be done, rather than “oh gods that sucked” and a complete rewrite.
DIY Thesis Theme
Editors and Predators